Hey, could you guys tell me what you think about this? Rating 1-10 Thanks a lot guys :)?

Its really good =] I read the other one too. I love them! And the end is a total cliff hanger! My favorite of your storys so far is the princess one. Which kinda sounds weird when i say princess one... =] but anyways that one was written really great and it makes me want to read even more at the end... except you werent even asking advice on that one so anyway back to this one =] its really good and well written and i like how Jake is all mysterious and confusing it keeps people wanting more. The only confusing part is the end because at first i did not know she had a sister and then poof she has a sister. =]